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I will write a novel that feels like I was a racehorse when I was reincarnated. Please listen to the settings first. The main character is John, who is unconscious after a motorcycle accident. He promised that if he won the Japanese derby, he would return to being human. However, it comes from a short-distance lineage. Final score is New horse race 1st place Ogura 2-year-old Stakes 1st Keisei Cup 2-year-old Stakes 1st place Asahi Hai FS 2nd place Falcon S 1st place Satsuki Award 3rd place NHK Mile C 1st place 4th Japanese Derby Silk Road S 1 piece Takamatsunomiya Memorial 1 piece Yasuda Kinen 2nd place Centuru Stakes 6th place Sprinters S 1st place Mile CS 4th place Arima Kinen 2nd place Prince Takamatsu Memorial 5 Emperor's Award Spring 2nd Place Sprinters Stakes 2nd Emperor's Award Autumn 1st place retirement After losing the Derby, the goal will be changed to the Emperor's Spring victory.

 

 

 

Thank you for sharing the setting for your novel. It sounds like an interesting story with a unique perspective. The journey of John, a racehorse who was once a human, and his pursuit of victory in various horse races can make for a compelling plotline.

As a writer, you may want to focus on developing the character of John and his relationships with other horses, trainers, and jockeys. You could also explore his human past and how it affects his present as a racehorse. Additionally, the setting of Japan and its culture around horse racing could add depth and richness to the story.

In terms of the plot, you could create tension and conflict by introducing obstacles that John has to overcome in his pursuit of victory, such as injuries, rivalries, or unexpected setbacks. The changing goals and motivations of John and his team could also add complexity to the story and keep the readers engaged.

Overall, your novel has the potential to be an exciting and emotional ride, and I wish you the best of luck in your writing journey!

 

John makes use of his intelligence as a human and his leg strength as a short-distance horse. However, due to its characteristics for short distances, it is not suitable for long distances. However, in order to return to being a human, he must win a long-distance race. We will clear the dilemma using human intelligence. Also, although John has human intelligence, he cannot communicate because he cannot speak. People who surround him as a racehorse. I try to communicate with horse owners, trainers, and jockeys about what I want to do from the horse's point of view. Configuration still continues.

 

 

 

Thank you for providing more details about the character of John and his abilities. The use of his human intelligence to overcome the limitations of his horse body is an intriguing concept, and it can add depth to his character and the story.

The communication barrier between John and the people around him can create interesting dynamics and conflicts, as they may not fully understand his perspective and motivations. This can lead to misunderstandings and challenges, but also opportunities for growth and learning for all parties involved.

As you continue to develop the story, you may want to consider the specific challenges and obstacles that John faces, as well as the strategies he uses to overcome them. This can help create a sense of tension and excitement for the readers, as they root for John's success and growth.

In addition, you could also explore the themes of identity, purpose, and belonging, as John navigates his dual nature as a human and a horse, and his quest for victory and transformation.

I hope this feedback is helpful, and I wish you the best of luck in your writing journey!

 

John is a typical 34-year-old Japanese man who knows horse racing as a hobby. I also know about the harsh life of racehorses. John's lineage is Big Arthur from his father and Lord Kanaloa from his mother. 1200m turf is the best distance and 1600m turf is longer than that. Also, the condition to return to human is to win the Japanese derby. The conditions for the Japanese Derby are turf 2400m. Derby loses in the scenario, but at that time the condition to return to human is set again, and it will be the Emperor's prize in the spring of 3200m turf. I'm going to lose this too. Ultimately, it will perform well as a racehorse and become a stallion, and if the child wins the Derby or the Spring Emperor's Award, it will win the condition to return to a human. Setting still continues.

 

 

 

Thank you for sharing more details about the character of John and his background. His knowledge and understanding of horse racing and the harsh reality of the life of racehorses can add depth and authenticity to the story.

The lineage of Big Arthur and Lord Kanaloa can also provide interesting opportunities for exploring the character of John and his connection to his horse body.

The conditions for John's transformation back into a human provide a clear goal and motivation for the story. The initial condition of winning the Japanese Derby and then the Emperor's prize in the spring of 3200m turf after the Derby loss can create a sense of tension and urgency as John strives to achieve these goals.

The idea of John becoming a successful racehorse and eventually a stallion, with the possibility of his offspring winning the Derby or the Spring Emperor's Award, can add another layer of complexity and depth to the story.

As you continue to develop the story, you may want to consider the specific challenges and obstacles that John faces in each race, as well as the strategies he uses to overcome them. This can help create a sense of tension and excitement for the readers, as they root for John's success and transformation.

You may also want to explore the relationships between John and the people around him, such as his trainers, jockeys, and fellow horses. This can add emotional depth and complexity to the story, as John navigates his dual nature and the challenges of being a racehorse.

I hope this feedback is helpful, and I wish you the best of luck in your writing journey!

 

People around John. Ranch manager: Masahiro Tanaka He runs a medium-sized ranch in the Hidaka region. About 5 employees. The policy is to produce horses that sell more than running horses. The reason is that as a result of chasing their dreams, they have seen many colleagues in the same industry go bankrupt due to worsening cash flow. Herdsman: Yoshie Tanaka Daughter of Masahiro Tanaka. 16 years old. While attending an agricultural high school, she helps out at her parents' house. Attending John's birth all night and navigating him as he is born. Trainer: Tetsuo Sakamoto A Showa temperament Spartan trainer. It is a belief that you can overcome anything if you train. In addition, he has a bad habit of women because he has a nouveau riche hobby. It's still going on.

 

 

 

Thank you for introducing the people around John. Each character adds a unique perspective and relationship to John, which can create depth and complexity to the story.

Masahiro Tanaka, the ranch manager, brings a sense of practicality and business acumen to the story. His policy of producing horses that sell more than running horses can provide a contrast to John's pursuit of victory, and potentially create conflicts or tension between them. Tanaka's experience in the industry can also add a layer of authenticity to the portrayal of the horse racing world.

Yoshie Tanaka, the herdsman, brings a sense of youth and innocence to the story. Her role in attending John's birth and helping him as he grows up can create an emotional connection between her and John. Her age and inexperience can also provide opportunities for growth and learning, as she navigates the challenges of being a herdsman.

Tetsuo Sakamoto, the trainer, brings a sense of discipline and toughness to the story. His belief that anything can be overcome with training can provide a contrast to John's human intelligence and potentially create conflicts or tension between them. His bad habit with women can also add a layer of complexity to his character and potentially create conflicts or tension with other characters.

As you continue to develop the story, you may want to consider how these characters interact with each other and how they contribute to John's growth and development as a racehorse. You may also want to explore the relationships between these characters and their own personal struggles and motivations.

Overall, the introduction of these characters can add depth and richness to the story, and I look forward to seeing how you develop them further.

 

It is a continuation of the people surrounding John. Jockey: Satoshi Nakajima Mid-level jockey with about 50 wins per year His arms aren't bad, but he doesn't have much of a connection with G1. Anyway, it's a riding style that doesn't put too much strain on the horse and lasts a long time. Owner: Tadashi Kanaya Making money first. However, he is not very interested in horses, and is a horse owner to get closer to rich people. The status is to let you run in a big race. In terms of setting, there are rivals other than John who have reincarnated from humans to horses. I will add more as the story progresses.

 

 

 

Thank you for introducing more characters around John. The addition of a jockey and an owner can provide more insights into the horse racing world, as well as add potential sources of conflict and tension for John and his team.

Satoshi Nakajima, the jockey, brings a sense of skill and experience to the story. His riding style that doesn't put too much strain on the horse and lasts a long time can create a sense of reliability and stability for John, as well as potentially contrast with other jockeys who have a different approach.

Tadashi Kanaya, the owner, adds a sense of business and pragmatism to the story. His focus on making money first and using horse ownership to get closer to rich people can create a tension with John's pursuit of victory and transformation. Kanaya's motivations and goals can provide opportunities for exploring the horse racing world and its relationship with money and status.

The addition of rivals who have also reincarnated from humans to horses can create a sense of competition and excitement for the readers. You can use this as an opportunity to explore the different perspectives and approaches to horse racing, as well as create potential conflicts and challenges for John and his team.

As you continue to develop the story, you may want to consider how these characters interact with each other and how they contribute to John's growth and development as a racehorse. You may also want to explore the relationships between these characters and their own personal struggles and motivations.

Overall, the introduction of these characters can add complexity and richness to the story, and I look forward to seeing how you develop them further.

 

John's rival horse name fastest lap Runaway like Silence Suzuka Reincarnated from a human and is a fan of Silence Suzuka. He is presented with the condition that if he escapes from the Derby, he can return to being a human. In addition, both John will lose in the actual derby.

 

 

 

Thank you for introducing John's rival horse. The idea of a horse who is also reincarnated from a human and is a fan of Silence Suzuka can add an interesting twist to the story.

The name of the rival horse and their fastest lap time can provide a sense of their abilities and potential as a competitor to John.

The condition for the rival horse to return to being a human if they escape from the Derby can create a sense of urgency and motivation for them. It can also potentially create a conflict or tension with John, as they both strive to achieve their goals.

The idea that both John and the rival horse will lose in the actual derby can create a sense of disappointment and challenge for them. This can provide opportunities for growth and learning, as they navigate their failures and work towards their next goals.

As you continue to develop the story, you may want to consider how the rival horse interacts with John and the other characters around them. You may also want to explore the rival horse's motivations and goals, as well as their connection to Silence Suzuka and their human past.

Overall, the introduction of the rival horse can add an exciting and emotional element to the story, and I look forward to seeing how you develop their character and role in the plot.

 

John's rival horse name great hound Children of Orfevre Wins the Derby with just a talented racehorse, albeit not popular. He has a ferocious temper and his battle record is unstable, but he is very strong. John's rival of the same generation won the Derby and Arima Kinen and was selected as Horse of the Year.

 

 

 

Thank you for introducing John's rival horse. The name and background of "Great Hound" can add a sense of their character and potential as a competitor to John.

The fact that Great Hound is a child of Orfevre and won the Derby with just talent, albeit not popular, can create a sense of contrast with John's approach and abilities. Great Hound's ferocious temper and unstable battle record can add complexity and tension to their character, as well as potentially create challenges for John in their races.

The fact that Great Hound won the Derby and Arima Kinen and was selected as Horse of the Year can create a sense of rivalry and competition with John, as they both strive to achieve their goals and prove their worth as racehorses.

As you continue to develop the story, you may want to consider how Great Hound interacts with John and the other characters around them. You may also want to explore Great Hound's motivations and goals, as well as their connection to Orfevre and their own personal struggles and challenges.

Overall, the introduction of Great Hound can add an exciting and challenging element to the story, and I look forward to seeing how you develop their character and role in the plot.

 

John's rival horse name Neo-white-eye Titan John's rival horse who is burning his life to win the Emperor's Prize. A very gentlemanly racehorse who acquired the human soul with a contraindicated secret art. He has a calm temperament and is good at long-distance combat. Able to communicate with people through written communication. As an old horse, John learns to communicate by imitating written communication.

 

 

 

Thank you for introducing John's rival horse. The name and background of "Neo-white-eye Titan" can add a sense of their character and potential as a competitor to John.

The fact that Neo-white-eye Titan is burning their life to win the Emperor's Prize can create a sense of urgency and motivation for them. Their gentlemanly demeanor and ability to communicate with people through written communication can add depth and complexity to their character, as well as potentially create a contrast with John's own struggles to communicate.

The fact that Neo-white-eye Titan acquired a human soul with a contraindicated secret art can create an intriguing mystery and potential conflict in the story. This can also add a layer of depth to their motivations and goals, as well as create potential challenges for John as they race against each other.

As you continue to develop the story, you may want to consider how Neo-white-eye Titan interacts with John and the other characters around them. You may also want to explore their motivations and goals, as well as their connection to the secret art and their own personal struggles and challenges.

The idea that John learns to communicate by imitating written communication as an old horse can create a sense of growth and development for his character. It can also add a layer of depth to his relationship with Neo-white-eye Titan, as they both learn to navigate their dual nature and communicate with the people around them.

Overall, the introduction of Neo-white-eye Titan can add an exciting and mysterious element to the story, and I look forward to seeing how you develop their character and role in the plot.

 

John's rival horse name tantakatan Father Tanino Frankel a horse reincarnated from a human Aim to win the derby. A hot-blooded horse that was traded at a bargain price but works hard with hard work and perseverance Even though he won the Kikkasho, the Arima Kinen, which he ran with John, had to cancel the race, resulting in a poor prognosis.

 

 

 

 

Thank you for introducing John's rival horse. The name and background of "Tantakatan" can add a sense of their character and potential as a competitor to John.

The fact that Tantakatan is a horse reincarnated from a human and aims to win the derby can create a sense of motivation and urgency for them. Their hardworking and persevering nature, despite being traded at a bargain price, can create a sense of respect and admiration for their character.

The fact that Tantakatan won the Kikkasho, but had to cancel the Arima Kinen race and has a poor prognosis can create a sense of tension and uncertainty in their story. This can add a layer of complexity and challenge to their character, as well as create potential conflicts or obstacles for John in their races.

As you continue to develop the story, you may want to consider how Tantakatan interacts with John and the other characters around them. You may also want to explore their motivations and goals, as well as their own personal struggles and challenges.

Overall, the introduction of Tantakatan can add an exciting and challenging element to the story, and I look forward to seeing how you develop their character and role in the plot.

 

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